Stories : Another Round….
I saw him behind the bar making about five different drinks at the same time. Standing maybe about 5ft 8 inches tall give or take the shoes he was wearing. His dirty blonde colored hair pulled back into a ponytail exposed his chiseled yet handsome face. His smile was wide and inviting, his deep brown eyes seemed to sparkle as he talked. Immediately I thought, “I wanna fuck him…..tonight.” I walked over to the bar with a plan forming in my mind about how I’m gonna stick my dick in this guys ass. And speaking of ass, boy did he have a nice one. At one point he turned around and the slim fit jeans he wore showcased a nice, plump ass that was on display for all to see. It was at that point I thought, “I’m fucking that pussy tonight.”
Once he got around to taking my drink order, I decided to turn on the charm. “What can I get you?” he asked. “Rum and Coke.” I replied, looking him in the eye and smiling. He smiled back. “Coming right up.” I then took my seat at the bar directly in front of his station where he was serving from. In a matter of minutes I had a very strong Rum and Coke sitting in front of me. Heavy on the rum mixed with a splash of coke. “I forgot to warn you, I’ll get you fucked up.” he replied with a smile. “A man after my own heart.” I replied. “Cheers.” I said after raising my glass before downing this powerful drink.
Lucky for me I was drinking on a full stomach which consisted of a steak dinner, so the alcohol really just gave me a buzz, but it was enough of a buzz that kept me feeling good. Soon we struck up conversation, which led to lite flirting. From there I continued to push the envelope and he went right aling with it. “So I get off in like two minutes, wanna join me at my place?” From there it was as if someone pressed fast forward.
Soon we were in the doorway of his studio apartment. Kissing and undressing. “Fuck me baby.” he moaned. From there he dropped his pants and underwear down around his ankles and bent over the arm of his couch. I kneeled down behind him and opened up his cheeks using my finger and spit as lube. He moaned before I stood back up. Pulling a condom out I slid it on and slid my dick into his tight asshole. Sliding it in felt so fucking good, but pumping him felt even better. He got on his knees which was better for me as I was able to grip his waist and slide in and out of him easier. At first I took slow strokes, gently in and out until I was digging in deeper and deeper and then bam! I turned into a crazed maniac. Gripping his waist my thrusts became powerful as I was baging the hell out if his ass. It felt so good digging in deeper and deeper and hearing him cry out and moan. His ass so fat, round, wet, and his pussy hole ran so deep. Damn it felt good to feel his hole tighten around the shaft of my cock. It felt so good digging in deeper and deeper while grabbing a fistful of his hair which drove him wild.
After thrusting my dick back and forth in and out, I took it out and removed the condom to where my dick just shot out a huge load of cim onto his lower back and ass cheeks. He cried out as he was simultaneously jerking his own dick and ended up spraying the arm of his couch with sweet and sticky cum. My heartbeat was racing so fast but soon returned to normal rhythm after I came. My forehead covered in sweat, I went to his restroom and took a piss and wiped off my dick. After returning to his living room, I found the bartender butt hole naked and laying on the couch, legs open. Smiling he then replied, “So how about another round?”.
Anonymous
A nice piece of mcporn. Nothing spectacular or memorable, but it gets the job done.
My one gripe is that there’s not enough detail. Ya gotta give your readers enough so they can picture themselves in the action.
And the farther you get into the sex, the more you need to slow down and describe, make your readers feel.
Flaubert famously noted that for a piece of writing to be effective, it should stroke at least 3 of the five senses every time you turn the page. Some of that would’ve been great here.
Cute little story, but most bartenders aren’t that easy.
You lost me at “I’m going to fuck that pussy tonight.”
lawd have mercy, where in the hell can I find a bartender like that. all the ones I ever take home can only go for one round; but then again I am 11 inches and can fuck for two hours without stopping.
Fucking hot. Did you ever taste his ass and what about his dick? A hot ass like that had to have a nice cock to go along with it.
I love it, wish that would happen to me…..anyone out there wants to give it a try?
I get that! Insatiable bottom here too. I love to fuck!
An intriguing little piece. “Pussy” was a major turnoff however. And the bartender being ever ever so so ready to pick up a customer was not quite real. Word usage could often use a second look (baging, back and forth in and out, restroom). Some words are more confusing than descriptive. Beyond that, better than much amateur porn. The writer should keep at it.
I am the actual writer of “Another Round” (honest) and I thank you all for your reviews and insight. I wrote it in a rush and from my cellphone (lol), I thought I had caught most misspellings, as well I just wanted to throw something quick out there for feedback. I appreciate everyone’s opinions it helps a lot and thank you for reading my quickie story.
Hot story,, but I agree with another respondent, bartenders are rarely that easy.
@joey, maybe for you there not.
Yea…cute story, but personally, lost me at “I’m fucking that pussy tonight.”
I have my fun as a pwr bottom, but nothing is more of a turn off & grosses me out than a dude referring to my ass as a pussy.
I agree you need to be a lot more detailed. When you spread his butt cheeks, you need to detail the amount of hair that was in there. The entire crack, just around the asshole or bare. The explicit detail about what the asshole looked like, smelled like, tasted like. That will draw your readers into the flavor of the story.